Sorry to be frank. The handout is boring. I worked with investment bank pitch books for many years. The rule is that you have only one minute of people's time. Think bullet points. Most of the present language can be culled. Use one easily discernible graphic in the heading with a simpler title.
I very much appreciate your work that is critical to our survival. Please know that I deliver this critique with all respect.
You need something that would work like an elevator speech, just enough information to pass on until the next floor. Bullet points are great as in PowerPoint. Also what if you don't want go to the doctor? Is that even allowed?
When people send the revised (shorter) version to friends and electeds, the hyperlinks can be the "boring" part that gives citations (for credibility). Also, suppose there are 8 key points, pick the top 3 for large subtitles, and the put rest on the back for those who have time and interest to read further. One of the tricks of loooong direct mail pieces is that some people WILL read a long explanation, and if you keep giving them more reasons to see things our way, they will be better informed.
Meryl, when I was hired to visit Congressional offices to point out the dangers in the Trans-Pacific Partnership (TPP) trade agreement, marketing handouts like the ones you’re presenting to us today were invaluable in helping our very small economic group defeat the TPP. So yes, these are great tools!
1. Start with an explanation of what it is and establish your authority eg.
Dr Meryl Nass, Bio Weapons Expert warns of the serious negative consequences of the World Health Organization (WHO) if the new amendments are passed by our governments this coming May.
2. Can the text be shortened? It’s wordy.
3. The call to action is very weak. Needs to be more on the lines of: WE NEED YOUR HELP TO STOP THIS
Also can you provide a hi-res pdf version so that supporters can get leaflets professionally printed if they want as opposed to printing it on their home printers?
I agree with Areana, especially the first three points. I think it would have a greater impact, including providing a necessary attention-grabber to entice people to read on. If it gets too lengthy I’m afraid people will not read the necessary information. Also, many people (who I talk to) have never even heard of the WHO.
Yes I unfortunately have found that as well. These two groups ‘should’ be well-known by now. They’ve certainly done a good job of staying out of the MSM and keeping the masses uninformed haven’t they?
I agree that there should be bullet points; ie the short version because some will just not take the time to read all of it. This way it may grab their attention and read on! No informed consent is unacceptable! A bit like James Roguski’s document!
I second that. Although the 2nd language in Panama is English, most speakers (tourist level of English) are living in the capital city whereas most resistance would come from the indigenous population that doesn't speak English (as their 2nd colonial language). For a good reason, the Panamanian govt even added the US invasion to remove Noriega from power (~4,000 deaths) to the list of (sad) national celebrations so indigenous resistance against the WHO coup would be very useful.
I think the text is too wordy and complex. For someone who has followed you from the beginning = it is all good but for those who are still "asleep" and don't know anything, I think this would overwhelm them. Be more concise but maintain the same talking points. Perhaps link to further information for credibility.
I love it. Very well done. I would love it as a handout; but to be honest, sadly, it needs to be simpler and shorter. As we know, people are hard to reach with a short attention span. Thanks for all your hard work. Jesus is coming soon💜
Please, this is so important, lets have millions of copies out there instead of just, say, 100,000 copies. So, yes, black and white could greatly increase the reach. And print on the bottom, along with how to get more info, "This is grassroots activism, join us by making copies and handing them to friends, strangers, doctors, public health agencies, media, and elected officials at every level."
For most people - it's a lot of reading.
Bullet points under main headers would make it easier to scan/read and grasp main points.
Sorry to be frank. The handout is boring. I worked with investment bank pitch books for many years. The rule is that you have only one minute of people's time. Think bullet points. Most of the present language can be culled. Use one easily discernible graphic in the heading with a simpler title.
I very much appreciate your work that is critical to our survival. Please know that I deliver this critique with all respect.
You need something that would work like an elevator speech, just enough information to pass on until the next floor. Bullet points are great as in PowerPoint. Also what if you don't want go to the doctor? Is that even allowed?
When people send the revised (shorter) version to friends and electeds, the hyperlinks can be the "boring" part that gives citations (for credibility). Also, suppose there are 8 key points, pick the top 3 for large subtitles, and the put rest on the back for those who have time and interest to read further. One of the tricks of loooong direct mail pieces is that some people WILL read a long explanation, and if you keep giving them more reasons to see things our way, they will be better informed.
Here are a few good examples, check the comments also (full disclosure I have contributed) https://tritorch.substack.com/p/operation-conquering-medical-tyranny/comments
It’s very succinct and comprehensive. Well done 👏
Meryl, when I was hired to visit Congressional offices to point out the dangers in the Trans-Pacific Partnership (TPP) trade agreement, marketing handouts like the ones you’re presenting to us today were invaluable in helping our very small economic group defeat the TPP. So yes, these are great tools!
Lovely!
But...a lot of people know nothing about WHO (who, what, how...ha ha).
I think there should be a bullet point cover sheet.
- Emily
My initial feedback:
1. Start with an explanation of what it is and establish your authority eg.
Dr Meryl Nass, Bio Weapons Expert warns of the serious negative consequences of the World Health Organization (WHO) if the new amendments are passed by our governments this coming May.
2. Can the text be shortened? It’s wordy.
3. The call to action is very weak. Needs to be more on the lines of: WE NEED YOUR HELP TO STOP THIS
VISIT DoorToFreedom.org to see what you can do
4. You’ve provided 2 website urls, just 1 would be stronger (even if the website has a link to the other website)
And 1 last thing, I’d put Tedros’ ugly mug much higher up, probably on the top banner - people will recognise him
Also can you provide a hi-res pdf version so that supporters can get leaflets professionally printed if they want as opposed to printing it on their home printers?
I agree with Areana, especially the first three points. I think it would have a greater impact, including providing a necessary attention-grabber to entice people to read on. If it gets too lengthy I’m afraid people will not read the necessary information. Also, many people (who I talk to) have never even heard of the WHO.
Yes most haven’t heard of the WEF either (sigh!!!). I’m stunned but that’s what we are facing!
Yes I unfortunately have found that as well. These two groups ‘should’ be well-known by now. They’ve certainly done a good job of staying out of the MSM and keeping the masses uninformed haven’t they?
Yup,Tedros at Top with Heading.. CRIMES AGAINST HUMANITY!
and presented as a "Wanted" poster!
Great points! Especially this: VISIT DoorToFreedom.org to see what you can do……..
Expand bullets on website.
Yes. Excellent points. Persuasive. More accessible documentation for doubters? QR codes to source material. Either way will hand out. Terrific work!!
I agree that there should be bullet points; ie the short version because some will just not take the time to read all of it. This way it may grab their attention and read on! No informed consent is unacceptable! A bit like James Roguski’s document!
I willl use it, but as I am in Costa Rica a Spanish version would also be important
Actually a Spanish version for the US is a good idea too!
I second that. Although the 2nd language in Panama is English, most speakers (tourist level of English) are living in the capital city whereas most resistance would come from the indigenous population that doesn't speak English (as their 2nd colonial language). For a good reason, the Panamanian govt even added the US invasion to remove Noriega from power (~4,000 deaths) to the list of (sad) national celebrations so indigenous resistance against the WHO coup would be very useful.
In TX true too
Love this! Well done! Printing handouts now!!!
I think the text is too wordy and complex. For someone who has followed you from the beginning = it is all good but for those who are still "asleep" and don't know anything, I think this would overwhelm them. Be more concise but maintain the same talking points. Perhaps link to further information for credibility.
I love it. Very well done. I would love it as a handout; but to be honest, sadly, it needs to be simpler and shorter. As we know, people are hard to reach with a short attention span. Thanks for all your hard work. Jesus is coming soon💜
Thank you again for the huge amount of detail you continue to provide. This is great to forward to others.
Honestly, I think it is too complicated for my target audience. Could you do a simpler version?
Then add a link to more information.
I'm definitely love to walk around it shopping center park lot and drop these on windshields
Won't print in black and white. Too much colour for 20 copies.
Please, this is so important, lets have millions of copies out there instead of just, say, 100,000 copies. So, yes, black and white could greatly increase the reach. And print on the bottom, along with how to get more info, "This is grassroots activism, join us by making copies and handing them to friends, strangers, doctors, public health agencies, media, and elected officials at every level."